Pre-vis_02
pre-vis_01 was ok.. ish? after submitting the work for on screen feedback it was mentioned that it was unclear, needed to be more powerful and that it needs something to communicate the story better.
Story in one sentence
The story of a rugged freight train driver manipulated into creating a wreck risking the lives of thousands to ensure the safety of his abducted daughter.
It still needs work, possibly the addition of a sign "Welcome to ____ city - 2 miles" somewhere in there to show that "the lives of thousands" are at risk.
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